My contribution to Flash Fiction Friday
Summer Solstice
The cool June breeze was
filled with the fragrance of magnolias.
James paced in front of the church.
He wiped his brow.
“How
do I look?” Jim said.
“Like
you did five minutes ago.”
“Are
you sure?
“All
right, you look like a hobbit,” Richard said.
He was taller, and thinner, than James and although the same age, looked
twenty years older.
“A hobbit?”
“On
steroids. Maybe with acromegaly.”
“Acro
what?”
Richard
leaned forward and adjusted James’s bow tie.
“Acromegaly. Pituitary tumor.”
“A
tumor?”
“Growth
hormone. Think Andre the Giant.”
“I
look like a hobbit with a tumor?”
“The
cummerbund helps.”
“Helps
what.”
“Dresses
you up. Draws the eyes away from the hobbit
look.”
“Fuck
you.”
“I
don’t think the soon to be Mrs. Tugwell would appreciate that.” He reached out and adjusted the tie
again. “I don’t think she’d want you all
worn out before the big night. So, save
it for later.”
“If
there is a later.”
Richard
looked at his watch. He just had to hang
on for another fifteen minutes. Get
James into the church, to the alter, say the words, and it was done.
“There
will be a later,” Richard said. “That’s the deal.”
“Maybe
I don’t want the deal.”
“Trust
me, it’s the only way out.”
James
stood at the alter and listened to the pastor.
He wondered why people came to weddings.
There were only so many ways to marry people, so many things to say
about marriage, commitment, round rings, eternity together, to death do you
part. Everyone knew the outcome, unless
it was The Graduate. And a wedding used
up the whole day. Or at least it had
used up his whole day, but then again he had a good seat. He looked at the bride, his bride, standing
across from him, the veil hiding her face from him and the pastor. He thought that she was supposed to pull it
off her face sometime, but she had not done it.
Richard coughed behind him. He
coughed again. Then he called his name,
softly. James scrunched his face as if
he smelled burning sulfur, and Richard stepped behind him, and put his lips to
James’s ear.
“He’s
talking to you,” he said and squeezed his arm.
James
looked at the pastor. The pastor stared
at him, the joyous face replaced by a frown.
They just looked at each other for a few more moments. James heard coughs and murmurs from the
observers.
“James,”
the pastor said, louder this time, raising his voice an octave on the last part
of his name. “Do you take Emily …”
James
looked at Emily. What the heck was he
doing here? With her. Now.
What had Richard gotten him into this time? How long would it …
Richard
grabbed him by the neck and pulled his ear to his lips again.
“Say
‘I will’ now,” he said, his warm moist breath hitting James’s ear. “Now.
Say it.”
“I
will,” he said, his voice lacking conviction.
The
pastor turned toward Emily and went through the questions and in what seemed
like an instant, Emily pushed back her veil and leaned forward and kissed
him. The observers clapped politely.
The
reception hall was dimly lit, like a hobbit’s cave, James thought. He held Emily’s hand as they walked between
the DJ’s console and a group of teenagers dancing like a frenetic giraffe on
crack. One of the teenage boys ran up to
Emily, she was just a few years older than he was, he took her hand and led her
to the rest of his group and, dressed in the long white gown, she looked like a
fairy princess with her minions flowing around her.
James
swirled the Wild turkey around in the glass, splashing the thin amber liquid
over and around the ice cubes, and swallowed it without stopping. The burn brought a tear to his eye. He put the glass down, and signaled the waiter
to pour another. A man he did not know
wrapped his arm around his shoulder and pulled him tight.
“We’re
brothers now, you and me. Take care of
her.” The man looked around the room,
his face shifted from face to face, and he leaned to James’s ear. “Or else.”
He squeezed James’s shoulder, tight, the pain shot to his elbow, and the
man walked away.
James
picked up the glass, swirled the bourbon and tossed it back.
“Slow
down big fella,” Richard said as he
walked up to him. “You’ve got a big
night ahead of you.”
James
looked over to the crowd of dancers, even larger than before. Emily was in the center, holding up the train
of the dress, her head tossed back, a joyous smile on her face as the group
pulsed around her. He smiled, drank his
third double in ten minutes.
“I’m
done. Find someone else.” He put the glass down, threw a five into the
tip jar and walked away.
“That
wasn’t the deal.”
“Deal? What deal Richard? Deals are negotiations, everyone gets
something, a trade. I’m the one losing
his shirt in ‘the deal’, and the rest of you wash their hands. Find someone else.”
The
room wobbled a little as James stepped forward.
He shook his head and looked at the ceiling light to right himself. His steps were deliberate as he walked to
Emily. She turned toward him and
smiled. She reached out with her hands, the
corsage was twisted on her wrist.
He
spoke to her, but the music was loud and the crowd muffled his words. She stepped closer. He leaned to her ear.
“You
have a good life.” He stepped away and
walked to toward the door.
“James?”
she said, the voice soft, buried in her throat.
“James?”
He
opened the door and the still June air rushed in and the smell of magnolias
travelled like a stream through the crowd and swirled around Emily as the
lights began to pulse.
Nice dialogue and description in this.
ReplyDeleteVery vividly crafted. I sense something darker and more sinister here than simply a shy groom. There's bigger forces here and at the end, you let our imaginations run loose. Everyone's behavior seems a bit odd, and when the lights 'began to pulse', that gave me a chill. I love this one. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHoly Cow! This was awesome! Like Joyce said, some dark secret drifted just out of reach leaving me wanting more.
ReplyDeleteI may be missing something obvious in this - but I'd like to know exactly what the deal was?
ReplyDeleteThe 'smell like burning sulphur' suggests something 'other-wordly' and this quirky tale has some well-observed scenes, like James savouring his drink at the bar!